Newby needs a review, please.

[dvevans]

Hello,

My name is Debra.

This project is a new adventure for me, thanks to Rosalind and her affiliate's handbook!

I'm a little nervous, but need a review before I start linking affiliates.
Any advice or suggestions will be appreciated.

Thanks in advance for your time and honesty!

dvevans

http://www.a-womans-style.com

[Rosalind Gardner]

Hey Debra,

Congratulations! on your new site!

I love it! Your homepage offers a very nice introduction to both you and your site's objective.

I would however like to be able to click on your picture and be taken to an 'about us' page that tells me a little bit more about you.

Your present hierarchy is good. In future you may want to break it down into a 3-tier structure... ie. 1st-level categories such as body, mind, spirit, work, etc. Next you'd have 2nd level categories like hair, skin, nutrition under 'Body' on which you'd have summary introductions to the products you promote and lastly, those links would take your visitors to individual product pages.

You may want to have a friend who is an especially talented speller look through your site for errors. I picked up quite a few during my look around. I suggest you do this before applying to affiliate programs.

I would also suggest that you bold your subtitles on the homepage.. ie. LIFE BEGINS AT 40 YOU KNOW!!! Most of the other pages have bolded subtitles already.

All in all, an excellent beginning! Hope that helps, and keep up the good work!

Cheers,
Ros

[dvevans]

Dear Ros,

Thanks so much for the review, suggestions and corrections! Great ideas, and I'm gonna do them all. Do you think I need to go back and re-categorize ?

Debra

[Rosalind Gardner]

Good morning Debra,

You're welcome. My pleasure to be of help.

As to recategorizing... at the moment, I think you'll be fine. Down the road, as you add more topics and products to the higher level categories you may want to think about breaking it down some more.

Cheers,
Ros