HDTV Simplified Review

[mtnest]

I would first like to thank you for taking this time out of your busy day to review my site HDTV-Simplified dot com . I have been live with the site since about November 19th. I have had only 1 sale and I am averaging around 50 hits a day. I would greatly appreciate any feedback. I am especially looking for feedback on:
* Does the sale page keep you reading?
* Do I need to use a different approach with the sales page?
* The book is approximately 68 pages long. Is my asking price adequate?

Thanks again in advance for your advice.

Michael Travis

[gregoryp]

Hey Michael.

I've been a lurker here for the last few years and actually signed up recently so though, hey...might as well help someone for the holidays

-your headline needs some work. Just a hint, learning is a lot of work. Lazy they are.
-there's very little proof you know what you're talking about.
-where's the opt-in?
-my B.S. meter just blew up...but I laughed about your "famous" money-back guarantee when you've already indicated it's an introductory product.
-You gotta get some testimonials somehow. Give it away to the first 100 people if you have to.
-Reading the copy, it seems you've guessed at what these people are looking for. Don't make assumptions about the issues people have. Do the legwork and your copy will be much more powerful.
-50 visitors a day ain't gonna cut it. Even if this converts at 1/2% you're looking at 1 sale every 4 days...if I got my math right there.

Well good luck, man.

Take care,

Greg

[Rosalind Gardner]

Hi Michael,

I think I would test the offer with a lower price. Quite frankly, I'd rather have thousands of sales at $9.99, than a hundred at around $27.

Too, if you plan to do more promos in the electronics market, why not set up a squeeze and send them a free report.

I've found that it's always easier to make a sale after I've given something away first.

Cheers,
Ros