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cheapmarket
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 Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 6:57 pm Post subject: Please take a look at my website(E-shop about Computers) |
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Hello Rosalind Gardner & all forum members...First i will introduce my self...My name is Loubo i am 17.5 years old...I live in a small town i Greece.I am considered computer-expert by all thw people that know me,including my teachers and the director(i have recieved some awards...like "Best Student at Computers in all the years of the school"...
Ok,now let's get into the point...
please review my site "Why i cannot post the site"?"I must have 15 post before posting URL"?
Make any comments & recomendations....I am using CJ
Also i would like to make some questions...
1.) Can i get paid from any greek bank,showing my ID and the check?
2.) Can i have products from more than 1 merchants at my site?
3.)Should i tell the audience(visitors) that i am an affialer and i use an affilate program
4.)What else should i write to the FAQ and About Us section?
Thank you in Advance !!
Loubo |
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BradleyD.Haslam
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Location: Ogden Utah... The great vacuum of the west!
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| Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2007 8:59 pm Post subject: |
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Hi Loubo,
You're 17?!
That's awesome!
And Greece is on my list of places I want to visit.
I bet it's beautiful!
| Quote: | | 1.) Can i get paid from any greek bank,showing my ID and the check? |
Though I'm not sure of the laws in Greece,
you should be able to cash a check with id.
Even if it's an international check,
at the most, they should just have to get it approved.
| Quote: | | 2.) Can i have products from more than 1 merchants at my site? |
Absolutely!
In fact, I recommend it!
Though you don't want you site to be strictly links,
instead, you need to provide a "user experience".
BUT, one thing to be sure of is monetizing every link out.
And sometimes you just can't provide the right products,
(ones that follow the theme of your site)
with just one vendor.
| Quote: | | 3.)Should i tell the audience(visitors) that i am an affialer and i use an affilate program |
The laws are changing, so this might be necessary one day.
But, for now, if you provide a link in a story you write,
or give a straight up "recommend", it shouldn't be a problem.
Your site experience should be the point,
and users will know the links are affiliate links.
If you want to cover your butt just in case,
I would just add a disclaimer, and link to it in the page footer.
| Quote: | | 4.)What else should i write to the FAQ and About Us section? |
I don't think I understand this question fully.
It seems site specific.
FAQ are usually about the site or product,
not about the region you're reaching.
EXCELLENT TO CHAT WITH YOU!!
Hope some of this helps a bit.
Brad.
PS.
The "can't insert a url till you make 15 posts" thing
is to cut down on the spam.
But it's a pain for someone looking for a site review.
Sorry, but it's necessary.
Give us the url to your site like this:
www<SPACE>your-site<SPACE>com
and we can figure it out from there.
K?
I would love to see it.
Chat later! |
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cheapmarket
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| Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 9:12 am Post subject: |
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Thank you a lot for the specific reply...
Another question is how can i write the price of every product(and should i?,99%)...Because i must not change the html that i took(although i make one change already,i set the link from _top to _blank, to open in a new page,i do not think this is a problem,right)?
As for the 4th question(faq and about us)
I was wandering what excactly to write at the faq,what questions....like Is "the site" safe? - Yes,bla bla...hackers safe, SSL....etc...
and the "about us" page,should i write something specific about me,a mini profile?
cheapmarket 50webs com
AS for the hosting...it's more than 90% sure i will buy a domain name from a greek company for 12-15 euro per year....first i would like to see if i will make any progress....i think 50 webs is the best free hosting.....50MB files...unlimited bandwith
thank u again |
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cheapmarket
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| Posted: Wed May 02, 2007 11:33 am Post subject: |
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Hello again,todat i made my "About" page..please take a look at it before i upload it...
| Code: | About
Cheapmarket® is a direct-to-consumer eCommerce site specializing in providing computer-related excess inventory, manufacturer-closeouts, high-demand and unusual computer components and peripherals at highly-discounted prices. Our aim is to amuse, inform, and entertain you -- while providing amazing values -- and to push the envelope of interactive Web functionality and secure online shopping ease.
Products
For every product you click to buy/order from here, you are transferred to a partner’s site where you can make the payment and receive the product.
All products visible on our site are in stock, ready to ship, and include a warranty
Products not listed on our site are not currently available for sale, but that can change at any time!
We always welcome feedback from visitors -- the best way for us to meet your needs is to know specifically what you want, so please, drop us a line.
Delivery – Shipping
We know how to do the job quickly and efficiently ensuring you will receive speedy delivery
Security – Safety
Your security is our priority, credit card transactions are fully safe according to the SSL encrypting standard (Secure Socket Layer), currently the most reliable standard on the Internet:
Your credit card number is encrypted
Your credit card number isn't stocked in our neither partner’s databases, it is deleted as soon as your order is completed
We are proud to serve you and we thank you for shopping at CheapMarket®
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Griff Grumbein
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| Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 1:51 am Post subject: |
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| cheapmarket wrote: | . . .Your credit card number isn't stocked in our neither partner’s databases, it is deleted as soon as your order is completed
We are proud to serve you and we thank you for shopping at CheapMarket® |
Other than revising the above for clarity, it looks fine! |
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cheapmarket
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| Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 7:13 am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Other than revising the above for clarity, it looks fine! |
can you suggest anything? |
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Griff Grumbein
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| Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 10:53 am Post subject: |
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| cheapmarket wrote: | | . . .Your credit card number isn't stocked in our neither partner’s databases, it is deleted as soon as your order is completed. . . |
How about: . . .isn't stocked in either our or our partner's databases. . .
The only reason I make the suggestion is that for people like me, spelling & grammar count. I have a particular ebook wherein the author goes as far as to say how important the two are, yet the ebook is filled with spelling & grammatical errors. It takes away from the credibility of the author.
Again, it doesn't necessarily mean the information isn't quality and/or relevant, but when I see it on a sales page, it tends to make me hesitate on purchasing a product. To me, with all the spell and grammar checking programs out there, there's little to no excuse for errors. It makes me wonder if they read their own copy, and wonder if they are just slapping stuff on pages to chase the money, or do they really have something valuable to offer.
Didn't mean to get long-winded, just wanted to give you my reason for commenting on that particular line in your copy. This is purely my own personal opinion, others may or may not agree.
Hope it helps, and best of luck with your project! |
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cheapmarket
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Thanks,i do not like grammar and spelling mistakes...i check them very carefuly(my self)...and ask for some advice(like in that forum)...
did you check the content of the website?
first i would like to see if i will make any progress and the i might buy domain name(99%)....i think 50 webs is the best free hosting.....50MB files...unlimited bandwith
cheapmarket 50webs com |
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Griff Grumbein
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Yes, I did check out your site. Very nicely done! I wish I had had as much on the ball at 17.5 as you do! Your future is quite bright indeed! I like your "bargain of the week" concept.
Having viewed your source, I would like to make a suggestion for your "bargain of the week": add specific keywords for that particular bargain to target customers specifically seeking such a system as well as those "general" searchers.
I would also like to suggest something for some of the blank space below your bargain: if you are techno-savvy, maybe you could add a technology related tip of the week. Worthy tips will do wonders for return visitors. Even if the current "bargain" is not what they are looking for, if they find that your tips have merit, it may well draw return visits from those who might otherwise visit once, and not return. Worthy tips will also add to your credibility and professional appearance.
Adding a "bookmark this page" icon will also promote return visits.
To reiterate what was wisely stated by others: make sure EVERY link leaving your page makes YOU money. If you can come up with a budget, get a Google Adwords account and create your own ads that are optimized to your "bargain" and / or "tip" keywords and content. With the right tweaking, YOUR ads will show up on your pages and you can't lose.
A final thought about your slogan beside your header: the word "cheap" nowadays has a negative connotation, i.e. "low quality". You might consider something like: "Selling the best products for the lowest prices on the net!"
Again, these are just my opinions to be noted or discarded as you see fit.
Best wishes on your success! |
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