critique of my site.

[toolleather]

My name is Pat and I would like a review of my site. I've been working on it off and on for about a year. I really dislike writing and am having such a hard time trying to get it going. Like how to write good content. My theme is supposed to be built around saving you time and money. I have the motivation and drive, but just seem to lack what do I put in next and how to get going on the affiliate program business. I really want to start earning an income from this so I can quit the J.O.B. in about 2 1/2 years or so.

My site: www.nothing-but-time.com
Any advice?
Pat

[boysbach]

Pat if you really dislike writing how about commissioning a ghost writer for you. I understand you can get them quite cheaply. I had done some ghost writing for Harper Collins (totally different ball-game) but the people who get ghost writers to do their books, have great ideas but no idea how to put them over. Find what you love about your web site and put your time and energy into that area. If you need to get someone else to help then do it.

[callie47]

I concur with that Pat... I noticed two gramatical errors immediately... that might be enough to send your visitors packing before going anyfurther into your site.

Another suggestion... Do you know someone who has great Speaking skills? Chances are good, they're a decent writer as well... ask them if they'd have a look at your site and make any corrections. Perhaps you could put your thoughts down on paper and let your friend fine tune it gramatically. I've done this a few times for a couple of friends... they provided the beer afterward!! (for a friend I'm cheap, but not easy!!)