please review my site under construction

[edwardspek]

Hello,

My first site is currently under construction.

So far I've just got the homepage up.

I'd like some feedback before I continue building pages.

Here's the link: http://spanish101.org

Thanks,
Edward

[Rosalind Gardner]

Hello Edward,

Good work! I absolutely love your bright header graphic. It sure is BOLD! Although it is a little BIG. Some viewers will have to scroll right and left to see the whole page. At this point, I see most folks setting their page widths at 728 to 740.

As much as I love yellow, I highly recommend changing your main body background color to white, as it's much easier to read.

I get a 'page not found' error at:

http://www.spanish101.org/marketplace/children.htm

I think perhaps more text and less graphics would be good on the main bookstore page. List the main categories with maybe one graphic and a description of what they'll find in that section.

Hope that helps and keep up the good work!

Cheers,
Ros

[ajdirect]

Hi, Edward just had a look at your webpage I think the background page would be better in white.

And you need to have your page smaller as there is to much scrolling and it gets irritating if you have to scroll all the time.

Other than that it seams OK.

Yours Alan.

[reubenwsl]

hi all, it's my first post... merry xmas!

I might sounds like a allien to say yellow looks fine, but i think the most important point is not the colour, it's your font type and size that is confusing reader. words are not categorized in proper way e.g. Title, content, remarks etc.

by first look as Ros mentions; yes the heading is too big, secondly... it doesn't pull much of my attention because i can't find important points.

sometimes, small wording makes your side looks clean and we only make the point BIG.

hope it helps.