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CrushBeaT
Joined: 12 Jan 2006
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Location: Indonesia
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 Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 3:42 am Post subject: please review and visit my first affiliate site |
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Hi all...
I've build my first affiliate site... it's about diet and fitness stuff..
please any advise, comments, etc..
www.shape-and-slim.com
thanks a lot... 
Andrew
www.shape-and-slim.com |
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Mike
Joined: 29 Dec 2005
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Location: Ontario, Canada
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| Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 10:53 pm Post subject: |
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I would say make a new banner for the top. Make it more inviting, and achieving. By achieving I mean maybe put a picture of someone who has just lost a lot of weight, and has a new view on life. I feel when I go to a diet webpage I want to see people who have succeeded.
Also the main text should be more organized. You have some lines with only 1 word on it. It kind of gets me dizzy reading it. I would also in the product section put personal explanation of the items instead of just images to the product.
Good Luck!
-Mike |
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boysbach
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| The banner I find some of the words difficult to read so a different banner would be good. Also how about some articles on dieting and fitness, they are something people expect to find on a diet and fitness site. |
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