Can You Give Me Your Kind Advise Please ?

[stevenyap]

I got a site:

www.wink-rightbrain.com

This site has not been performing very well. I need you expert advise how to improve it better.

Low visitor, low opt in and no sales.

My site is identical to my principal site from wording and design layout. Can anyone suggest to me how to set apart from them and get more visitor and more sales.

Your comment would be very much appreciated.

Thank you.

Regards,
Steven Yap

[Rosalind Gardner]

Hi Steven,

I just visited your site and what I noticed first is that although it looks good with the flash intro, the site subject matter and objective are not immediately apparent.

I was left thinking.. 'what's this about?' and had to look down the left nav to find a link to answer the question.

Most folks however won't look for that link, so that would explain why your sales are low.

Visits are low because there is very little content on the homepage.

Would suggest a redesign to get the message out on your homepage.

Hope that helps!

Cheers,
Ros

[stevenyap]

Thanks Ros !

I am greatful for your advise.

I will take your suggestion to re-look into redesign of the website.

I will also take note on the delivery of the message what I am selling and benefit in a sales letter when a visitor visit my website.

I agreed, Nav bar located at the wrong place I would said.

I do not understand when you said that the website does not have content. Can you explain to me a bit more, please ?

I think I have not seen many good site, could you recommend to me sites that I could visit and use it for my reference to have the better website planning of the sitemap and delivery.

Regards,
Steven Yap
www.wink-rightbrain.com