2 Site to Review

[ouida]

Hello,

I'd like a site review on both of my sites I'm not finish with them but just wondering what you think.

I'd also like to know where can I find ezines to promote the adult website.

The Passion Party Plus website started out as a dating site. Then I decided to add shopping and entertainment. Now its starting build up as a directory but with a different style. I like seeing the banners instead of seeing the address and words about the sight. I also, have this site on the adult website.

The Passion4Adults is something that is probably not agreeable with most people. I had seen that this industry does so much money I was trying to use it to bring in income fast to promote the other website and eventually sell it once it reaches a certain peak. I tried to make it different from the usual websites with everything hanging out. I've also decided to add some adult dating sites and the dvd,movies sites etc.

Please feel free to let me know what you think everyone good or bad. I won't be affended at all. This is business not a pitty party. I'm trying to take care of my family and have a career at home.


I'd also like for Rosalind to give her opinion on the sites.

thank you

http://www.passionpartyplus.com

http://www.passion4adults.com

[zaba99]

Well I will start things off.
I am not sure of your total intent for these sites, so these comments are my opinion and to be taken just as that.

I think you can get rid of the huge header especially on the passion party plus site and start your website beneath that. The main reason is that is really where your sites actually start. The rest is just filler and adds increased length to your pages which is not needed.

When I first started to look at your sites, I immediately asked what these sites have for me the customer? What is the main value that I can take away from these sites? I know you say that these sites are still works in progress but where is the real stuff within your pages.....I mean the content! All I see is banners and ads all over the place. To me this shows this site is for the main purpose of generating money. But it should be the opposite, give great reliable content and info then the money will come naturally.

If I came across these sites and seen all the banners and ads I would just pass onto the next group of sites.

Like I said, just my view and opinion on sites that are still in progress. People are generally looking for information and genuine reviews within sites and that is what you need to add to your sites.

Duane

[ouida]

Hello,

Thank you, I was wondering if I was looking like I needed money. I guess I need to view more websites. I was wondering If I should just make it a directory and loose the banners all together. I'm thinking I should just promote info products because that is what I see is makeing the money on internet individually.

Thank You
Ouida